LETTERS & LINES: Twenty-six on 20
Poetry is not my usual medium, but sometimes a prompt will inspire me to write in that form.
Below is a piece sparked by a contest; the challenge was to write a poem in 20 lines focused on loss.
The 20-line constraint got me thinking about other number-defined things and, somehow, the alphabet came to mind — 26 letters. Hmmmm, I pondered: How about a poem in 20 lines about 26 letters. OK, I said to myself, I'll give it a go.
The content evolved as I wrote, with me not knowing at line 1 where I would end up at line 20; all I knew was that, somehow, I needed to make the 26 letters of the English alphabet the focus woven around the idea of 'loss'. And do this on 20 lines. (How long is a line? What do the contest creators mean by 'line'? I don't know and I didn't let that bother me.)
The result is below. I'll let you be the judge of it... All I know is that, even though I missed the contest deadline, I had fun playing with my idea in this form, and my writing group pals enjoyed my reading of the poem to them at last month's session.
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Listen to me read the poem on Soundcloud
LETTERS & LINES: Twenty-six on 20
- Twenty-six. The perfect number, they said.
- Not too many, not too few.
- Just right, they said, to say something — everything — in the English language.
- Vowels + consonants = words that shape meaning into stories.
- But one day the S disappeared, with A and E following soon thereafter.
- Why stay, they said, when the best-shaped letter was gone.
- At which point the Z, the Y, the X stood up and left, too, their feelings hurt, for THEY were the best-shaped letters, no?
- The O was outraged, the P spluttered, the Q was querulous and, before the G and H and M knew it, they were all joining the exodus from the 26-letter line.
- That left but 14 of the originals remaining, wondering what to do, how to manage themselves in view of this lettered insurrection to the natural order of TWENTY-SIX.
- As if joined by some alphabetical force, suddenly, the I and the U realized they alone remained of that all important sub-group: THE VOWELS — and that precious little could be said without them.
- So, I and U about faced and scuttled off leaving an even dozen of lowly consonants to settle in their dust.
- Stoic they were, but knowing, too, that vowel-less they were helpless, hapless, hopeless.
- No words could they build, not even on a Scrabble board.
- The remaindered letters grouped themselves by shape.
- B, C, D, J and R joined forces as ‘the curved ones’, and rolled right out of line.
- F and L and T stood straight and firm.
- K and N and V and W then looked at each other.
- Finally, W said: “We are the angled ones, the last ones here — the chosen ones.
- “We are stronger than mere uprights for our angles give us strength.”
- These 20 lines of nonsense prove nothing but that playing with constraint is fun when twenty-six letters are your playmates.
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Land acknowledgement: I respectfully recognize that I live on the original lands of Anishinaabe, Cree, Oji-Cree, Dakota and Dene peoples, and on the homeland of the Métis Nation.
What a fun bit of whimsy. And hearing your voice! Love that hint of England. Thank you for starting my day with a smile
ReplyDeleteBrilliant! And fun!
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